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I Wouldn't Day Dream So Much

My love for you, it fills my dreams.
I feel it in my heart.
My thoughts are always filled with you.
How come we're still apart?
You may not know I love you.
You may not know I care.
For I admire from a distance,
My heart filled with dispair.
I fill my boring days,
With only thoughts of you.
How we can be together.
How I can say "I love you."
Sure, I've dreamed of us with children,
Us having no command.
Or walking on the beach
With our toes in the sand.
The one dream where I lay
In a hospital so bleak.
But there you are by my side,
And you are telling me:
"Forgive me for before!
For I kept my love a secret!
My heart belongs to you
For our hearts as one is perfect!"
Then you sweep me off my bed
And suddenly I feel better.
You take me on a ride
On a horse you call "Red Letter".
"Hey, wake up!" my friend says.
It was only a dream and such...
I guess without you in my life,
I wouldn't day dream so much.

Author notes

I wrote this poem for I guy I once REALLY liked. I really did day dream a whole bunch about him. But what can i say? I'm a dreamer!


P.S. For the IF YOU WANT EASY POINTS AND A SHINY TROPHY... contest I have chosen option #4! <:-)

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  • lexie like woah
    September 6, 2007

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    oooh i love this! exactly what i wanted from the option... it is cheesy but not bad cheesy, cheesy in a cute way.. thanks for entering and best of luck. oh and ps, great rhyme and meter.. it adds to the poem


  • Simply Waiting
    June 8, 2007
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    the writers will write, the singers will sing, and we, the dreamers, we will dream

    RtheO