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The Best Love/Emo/America Poem Ever!!!!!

I set out to write you the best darn love poem, and this is what I came up with, becuase I love you SOOOOOOO much and because our love is better than everyone elses, and I think that flowers are almost as beautiful as you!

*A-hem!*

To me, a flower is love,
a flower is from above,
it blooms in the sod,
given to us from God.

I love you like a rose until death
and I will write prose with each breath,
I will give you my dreams and the clouds,
the stars, moon, and the "Scream out loud"s.

I love you like a rose in the rain,
but on top of a piano,
and with just a little bit of sunlight
so it looks better.
Oh! Maybe even some sheet music in the background!


Uh...
A tulip is like a kiss...

Um, I mean,

You are my springtime after winter,
the warm after the cold,
you make poems stream out of my printer,
you make me a poet that's bold!

But uh, I'm so deep because I'm a poet... and so...

You'll never understand me all the way,
because I'm so deep.
So deep and so alone.
Alone in the black.
The deep dark black,
that I sit in,
without any light.

My soul is black
and my eyes cry
black tears,
but of course you can't see them
because it's dark.

Not that you could see them anyway, because I'm alone.
And no one can see me-
The real me.

But

maybe,

if I space out my lines,

        I can express
just

          how
                          deep


I am



in the blackness.

And the blackness is the pain I feel. (Isn't that DEEP?!)
I will never really know love.
Because I can't give all of me
because love is understanding,
and you can't understand the black
unless you were born there,
like me.


... but I was also born in America.

And the black can't compare
to the red white and blue.
Because I live a land of freedom,
where I am free to love and cry when I want
because no one else in the world is.
And no love or black can touch the eagle
that soars above us all.
The eagle of freedom, and unity.
We are the melting pot of the love, the black, and of peoples,
and pride is beauty,
and beauty is a flag
and it has 50 stars.

Like the stars in the sky,
that I make love wishes on for you.

Like the stars in the sky,
I am surrounded by black.

Like the stars in the sky,
we are beacons of freedom and justice.

I love you, black America!!!!!!

Author notes

Written for the "Bad Poetry" contest.

A contest entry

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