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Nude-ditty!-(option one)

I stand a flesh parchment,
graced with green pupils
that study for you now,
two brown periods
sittng in stereo spots
three quarters up my length,
a bit further down comes
the  at (@) symbol of my
no-belly prize button,
Below that one can find
a neat squiggle of curly lines
just above
the bend of a large flesh comma,
that often becomes
a larger exclamation mark,
Punctuating the envelope of
my lover's folds,

Beneath the large flesh comma
lie the balls of my pointed pen,
which dangle over the back space,
that offers two tight parenthesis
wrapping around another ass-terick.
The border of my flesh poem holds
ten digits which help adorn the
extremities of my life written,
aiding much in the creation
of this and other works of bliss.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Artis

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  • Dalaney gold member
    June 5, 2007

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    Oh, my dear missing Cabana Boy -
    redeemed yourself with this poem.
    Change the font color (so I can
    read this again without burning
    my eyes) and welcome to my finalist
    list.... Love, Lane

  • kirkman
    June 5, 2007

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    good


    Great ditty! Light & funny. i appreciate something that looks at the body lightly, not porno for a change.


  • Lie 2 Me Once Again
    June 5, 2007

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    I love this! Very creative and well done I especially liked the lines
    just above
    the bend of a large flesh comma,
    that often becomes
    a larger exclamation mark,
    Punctuating the envelope of
    my lover's folds
    Kinky hehe
    Great write!!!


  • ProudMomma
    June 5, 2007

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    great write i really like how u bring the punctuation to life i love it great write and good luck in the contest