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Truth

(Tanka)



The epitome
of love is touching without
speaking any words;
for it is by actions that
we display our intentions.




©2007

Author notes

Written for the contest: Twenty words or less by Excul
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2352816

Entered in the contest: 25 Words Or Less - Prewrites Allowed!!!
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2383912

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 31, 2007

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    I definately agree with you... after all actions do speak louder than words... they are very important to me and are the only way in my opinion you can truly show love is my uttering the right words and the right actions alongside them.

  • star wars fanatic
    June 5, 2007

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    Very nicely done. I like the way much of your poetry seems like a statement to a mentee. Anyway, how do you write a tanka? I would like to learn. Very good write, fellow poet.