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Lyrical Legend

It's impeccable
unbelievable
simply wondrous
plain magic
how i can conjure up
these rhymes
rythmic phrases
the immensity of my vocabulary
makes you wish you could write
lyrics to match these
simply inseperable
my pen and me
the winning combination
you dont wanna f*ck
with me
because it's
simply uncomprehendable
straight up unexplainable
how i can reach deep
into my cranium
and pull out rhymes like
these
my poetry's so hard
it mught as well be a rap
someone give me a beat
it's simply astounding
how i can conjure up these
phrases
deep intellectual sayings
lyrics so pure
you thik its mental abuse
how i got you
trapped in this poem
intwined in my intellect
cleless in my vocabulary
you cant touch me
cuz i stay slicker then fresh ice
tight as new weave
i'm among the best of the best
cant too many of you
top me
i spit these rhymes so much
the doctors think i'm vomiting
i'll burn you up im my rhymes
cuz they stay hotter then fish grease
i'm a real lyricist
aint no other like me
im an original
look around at the others
i bet you $10 you wont find
another like me
with the intellect, talent & brains
to lyrically replace me
i'm a lyrical legend
like nas & chrisette michelle
you cant forget about me
because the words of my poems
the lyrics of my rhymes
will forever play in your memory
over -n- over again in your minds

Author notes

my friend got first place in the poetry cotest with this. what do u guys think?

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  • Cammie09
    March 18, 2008
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    OH MY GAWD! your friend wrote this? NO WAY!! tell me who they are. I dont believe you!


  • invisible angel
    June 5, 2007

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    LOL that is pretty good! I got lost into it but it drug me around and held onto me

    Love ya Bree

    Russ