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Love Entwines

Missing image
Lite-bright miracles, neon moons, universal skies,
Angel hearts, hear my prayers, underneath my sighs
When I capture, just mere thoughts, I weave them into words,
In hopes I reach some souls, when my heart is heard.

It's perseverance, in my soul, I found dreams anew,
Now I weep, tears of joy, under crystal blue
Two hearts entwine, with oxygen, living love instead,
For life stems, from the heart, from your poems I've read.

Pure love soars, through ocean shores, in worlds of dark array,
Lead me through, summer's songs, winters and the gray
I believe the crashing sea, and rainbow skies soft hue,
Just as I, gaze upon, your words tender true.
 

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Thanks for reading us, much love and peace~

poeticweaver & coffeeangel316

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  • Naridill gold member
    June 27, 2007

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    Wow not only was the background and picture mesmeretic, but you have a beautiful creative mind. Such unique yet understandable and sensual.


  • coffeeangel316
    June 18, 2007
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    love it hun you did a wonderful job

  • coffeeangel316
    June 12, 2007

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    I still have to come and see it becuase it is wonderful. I think we did a great job but you being the master of it all. Luv, Trace


  • Jalalbad gold member
    June 6, 2007
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    Never a lovelier poem

    than this has been written. Smile.
    Judy


  • weavertr08
    June 6, 2007

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    I love this poem i wish i could write this good. i really look up to you in alot of ways. and when you write although i am very busy i stop and actually think and remember all the good times we have had. i love you uncle Tim.
    -Tristia


  • kjack
    June 5, 2007

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    Speechless

    This has left me completely speechless. I honestly don't know where to start or what to say other than this was simply magnificent. What a majestic piece of work this is. Good luck in the contest. This is so beautiful.

    becca


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    June 5, 2007

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    Awesome. Enough said. I cant say what hasnt been said already. You two, down well togethethe rythmn of apparent, two great souls.
    Tory


  • Asdzaa Nadleehe
    June 5, 2007

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    Beautiful words the two of you do weave..
    Bravo , such a beautiful and tender write..
    Peace
    ~M~


  • smiley
    June 5, 2007

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    Pure Beauty

    you two have done a wonderful job here. I could feel the beauty and purity in this piece. It kept me involved from beginning to end..

    Yvonne


  • coffeeangel316
    June 5, 2007
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    looks awesome hun you did a wonderful job I really enjoyed it.


    • poeticweaver gold member
      June 5, 2007
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      Thanks,

      I really appreciate your time penning this one with me sweet soul, and the words of inspiration you created made the piece. Love ya sis, bro Timothy


      • coffeeangel316
        June 5, 2007
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        you know i enjoyed it and I think you inspired me. thank you for letting me have the chance to write with you.


  • Wandika gold member
    June 5, 2007
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    Good rhythm

    Really enjoyed this one Timothy.

    Jim


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    June 5, 2007

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    So sweet and softly written:f straight to the heart it does flow Pure love soars, through ocean shores, in worlds of dark array, Lead me through, summer's songs, winters and the gray...Like a whisper in the dark to the love of your life thank you so very much for sharing  such a wonderful piece

     

    much love

     

     Ann


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 5, 2007

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    My wonderfully sweet, loving, and gentle love brother,
    I don't have the adequate words to tell you how much I love and adore you
    Your poetry has always touched me from the very first time I read it and I will always come back to inhale your beautiful words. I couldn't feel closer to you than if you were my blood brother Know you're my brother of the heart and I love you very much!
    Forever and always, your sister in love,
    Sandy

    • poeticweaver gold member
      June 5, 2007
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      -hugs-

      I'm glad you enjoyed this piece sweet sis, you know I feel the same way about you. You're always one of the first comments on my poetry. And I always appreciate the tender words that pour forth from that loving heart and soul of yours. May you be blessed in all you do, for you truly are a blessing! THanks for calling me Love brother, it will forever remain in my heart. Love ya sis, you're truly beautiful in all ways. Peace, Brother Timothy~

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