Embodied within my mind
are parallel thoughts
dominated by the past.
The imprint
of the childhood barcode
has been the principal
rationale, that has assisted
and choreographed
this punctured existence.
Clusters of reflections
have bombarded my spirit
over time,
as I have lived through
many aberrations.
Now suspended
in waves of uncertainty,
I tend to exhibit
apprehension and suspicion,
scepticism of a world
in complete disarray.
As random occurrences
collide within,
I take refuge
under the branches
of inconsequence.
Author notes
WORDBANK #5 IN ORDER -
EMBODIED, PARALLEL, DOMINATED, BARCODE, CHOREOGRAPHED, PUNCTURED, CLUSTERS, SUSPENDED, EXHIBIT, RANDOM
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A contest entry
- Wordbanks by Laura Lamarca.
650 points, ended June 6, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow!!
Holy Moly what a way to use that Word Bank!!
Powerful piece and You certainly have taken me on a Journey~
I have another ticket- ready for another whirl
Love it!!
Beautifully penned!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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This is wordbank #5
I like the very personal touch you've used here, taken the words as your own and implemented them well. There's so much talent in this contest that you're all making my job very hard 
Thank you for entering and good luck!
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Fantastic
Wow, very intense and incredible use of word bank. Good luck in the contest.
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