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Surprised?

You don't notice me
so are you over me?
I can't let that be
can you not see?
I miss you, wish you
Luck
and honestly
I don't give a fuck
if an empty sorry
is all you have for me
clarify that I'm out of your mind
we're losing time
to find what we want
but we already Know
what I want
so let me rephrase the phrase
that just passed through my lips
we're losing time
to find what You want
now How about we type that
in a bigger font
you're selfish, shallow
dishonest, disloyal
but all that I want is to hold you
close me
can't you See that slut?
I'll refuse to give up
trying to make you mine again
with you I'll be fine again
so I have something to send
to let you know how I feel
to make my feelings all feel so clear
do you hear me?
Girl do you Realize
how about I capitalize
that fact that
I love you
think of you
know of you
and all the bad
that your mind has had
but I want you
surprised?

Author notes

slam poem.
meant to be read aloud.

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 5, 2007

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    i think you should read this out louds, this is something strong and just something, keep it flowing, i enjoyed reading this