I’m sharing some intimate time with her
Loving every minute
We head to the bedroom
For the evening
Please do not disturb
A contest entry
- The Perfect Seduction by Emerald Dreams.
1750 points, ended June 13, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-write Quickie- Hurry by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended January 18, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pimp up my love poetry by leander.
700 points, ended February 22, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hmm, this is a bit simple actually, and short. But off course, one wouldn't want to be disturbed when you're in the bedroom with the one you love
thank you for entering, I wish you all the best!
Leander -
LOL, well said. Hang that sign upon the door, and as it closes, dim the lights. We all need that kind of time, and what better way than with someone you love. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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Intereing take on the contest. Thanks for entering.
Emerald Fire
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