For your eyes only
Is the love held in my gaze
For your eyes only
Is the admiration of beauty worth a thousand
Smokey Mountain hazes
For your eyes only
Is the love of a thousand galaxies of this universe
For your eyes only
Is the love that fills the ink of each passion filled verse
For your eyes only...
Or rather for your body only
Is each love soaked kiss
That brings in tow unimaginable bliss
That poureth out like water from my lips
And every love drunk thrust from my hips
For your eyes and thighs only
Each and every caress of my hand
That causes your body to stir and you hair to stand
For your eyes and sacred garden only
The strong yet gentle strokes of my fingers
That causes the eruption and your ecstasy to linger
These are the visions that you see
And are soon to be
For your eyes only
But only revealed...
From my eyes only
Author notes
I know it has been awhile since I have added a piece, and for that I apologize. I have been busy lately with High School graduation and finalizing my collegiate affairs for the next semester.
A contest entry
- Love Can Be Sweetly Sensual by Heavenly Angel.
525 points, ended June 10, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - MOST SENSUAL WRITE EVER!!! by SummerlandRayne.
499 points, ended July 9, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Invite Only; Me on Their List by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended January 3, 2008, 79 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Lovely painted description throughout your poem. If anyone has ever been to the Smokey Mountains, then they truly know how beautiful it is there. I want to thank you for entering my "Invite Only; Me On Their List" contest.
Ted E
PS: Once I have commented on all of your entries, then I will reread them all and choose the one that will be brought forward for being selected as Gold, Silver, Bronze or HM.
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passionate finger tips in this write i think you did a excellent job in penning this it was a pleasure to run across this piece
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This is such a lovely and passionate write. Loved the feeling of sensual oneness of this being for your eyes only! And for your body only...places the reader in a position to feel so very special and blessed. Thanks you so much for the entry...loved it! best of luck!
Peace,
Azlyn
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sexy and sensual. ooo i loved it so romantic with falvor pouring all ova my sensations this poem is equisite
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spectacular and dreamy
a poem is great for me when i can hear you reading it to me while im reading it myself your an amazing poet baby i love every verse and every word
i love you and miss you
your baby girl,
ali
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Spectacular Read
from your most wonderful eyes. The repetition is well balanced. The rhyme is beautiful, set in a sensual concept of love and passion...well written, I would love to hear you read this one out loud...I bet it be beyond awe.......Excellent piece of poetic art you have created......novy
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Most beautifully and wonderfully written
I love this! Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest!
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