I'll fill your lungs
With a disgusting smoke
Don't fight with me
I'll make you choke
I'll rot your teeth
And fuck with your brain
I can hurt millions
And still remain untamed
You'll lose all your family
And all of your friends
But oh no my dear
This isn't where it ends
You'll steal and gamble
You'll lose all your money
I'll make you a fiend
Trust me on this honey
But whats left to say about me?
I'm no natural born thriller
Can you tell me what I am?
I'm simply a man made killer
A contest entry
- come on you can do it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by candy-coated-razors.
460 points, ended June 10, 2007, 20 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Guess what I'm talking about!!
Comments
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talent!
the personification, rhyme and flow of this poem is captivating. good word choice.
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Wow.
FANTASTIC
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Wow, that's really good. Keep up the great work.
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Thats funny!
This is a contest that me and my daughter did together!
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drugs are bad.
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Intresting
Deep thoughts here. I found this to be very entertaining. But I think the answer is kind of evident. Thanx for sharing this one. Was quite fun to read. -
Very personal with my family
awww yes, I am sure I know exactly what you are,
and this is a proven fact
I'll rot your teeth
And *bunny* with your brain
I can hurt millions
And still remain untamed
You'll lose all your family
And all of your friends
But oh no my dear
This isn't where it ends
You'll steal and gamble
You'll lose all your money
I'll make you a fiend
Trust me on this honey
Read some of my Mothers work if you want to..
her name is badddgirl
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