Walking on a cloud of endless love
The fragrance of your breath
Fills my spirit with life
As I gaze into your endless eyes,
I am taken away for an eternity
My breath escapes my vibrant lungs
Euphoria envelopes my thoughts
I'm held prisoner by your gentle heart
Lock me up and throw away the key
For I'll never escape your embrace
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Options For (Somewhat) Trophy-Less Teens by FallingTwilight.
450 points, ended June 14, 2007, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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It was a good poem but a bit short! Thank you for the poem!
Fire Angel -
great piece! the flow and description is wonderful. an absolute joy to read! great work and keep pennin'
Jasmine
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