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naked nights

these are the times
of faries and air
dust dancing around you
as you kick up your feet
the times love was not lost
love surrounded you
"the tornado" i call it
these naked nights
you run free
your tornado heading in
every direction
no matter where you want it to go
these naked nights
i miss
one day
i'll run free again

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  • midnight dreamer.
    July 9, 2007
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    thank you so much! :]


  • Pheo
    July 9, 2007

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    I really love the freedom you've captured here, especially within the wildness of a tornado and the carefree simplicity of nakedness. It also resonates on a personal level. Well done!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 10, 2007

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    i like this poem i really do i mean you did a great job on this, i enjoyed it, keep it flowing this was an amazing read

    • midnight dreamer.
      June 10, 2007
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      thank you, i'm glad you liked it, i hope you get the chance to read more of my poetry, you don't have to applaud, i just really like the feed back :]