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Heartache

I had thought that you were different

I guess I was wrong

you're just like the rest

You dont care

Are you blind?

You must be to not have seen that I'd given my

battered heart to you on a silver platter.

You tore what was left of it to pieces.

I can't take the agony and pain.

It is too much as tears of heartache fall

I let you in too far

so far that I cant breathe without you.

I cant let you go

so I have to endure the heartache.

I am not sure if I am strong enough but I cant help it

You're my everything

I'll always love you.

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  • vampire.lust.death
    July 28, 2007

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    ....wow ur a poit whith storng passion ilove it i feel ur poem as if it shind on me keep it up iam a sucker for poiems like this