Little Alice
Has just grown up
Innocence finally taken
Cold, shaking
But you're right here
Dont know what I'm feeling
Little Alice
Has just grown up
Innocence finally taken
You left me, that day
Havent seen you since
Dont know where you are
Little Alice
Left all alone
For that so-called "love"
Havent heard from you
I think your staying away
On your own damn will
Little Alice
Left all alone
For that so-called "love"
The sky turns blue
Everythings ok
I dont need you
>Little Alice, she'll smile and laugh. She no longer cares<
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iunno lovely personal
iunno
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Left all alone
For that so-called "love"
that line really hit home with me. I've been having issues with my boyfriend and it seems our relationship is near an end...and that line described things well.
not sure if thats what you meant by it, just my interpretation of the line.
the overal poem was amazing! you're an awesome writer! keep writing! =]
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This poem, god, means a lot. But even if that line doesnt mean to a tee what you interpreted it as, it doesnt matter. Im just glad that you made your own personal connection to something that i wrote, without even knowing you, or what your going through. Thanks for still commenting on my work...im glad someone does
B.Blair
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