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circles

my head spins
the ground slipping beneath me and soon
I fall down upon its rough surface
scraping my elbow
gashing my knee
laughing at the hilarity of it
looking up at the stars
watching them grow apart and then
back together only to split once more
blood pumping
head rushing
where am I going dear

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  • Cyanide Milkshake
    June 7, 2007
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    Lol a feeling I know well, especially the stars bit, that was an excellent touch ^.^ x x x


    • Cokaine
      June 11, 2007
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      I'm getting to know it a little too well. kinda scary