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Heaven's Gone Bowling

Crack! The sky opens
before bewildered eyes
cuddled in a blanket
something which one vies

 

trickle, trickle, trickle

followed by some minor hail

we're waiting for the thunderclap

behind this watery veil

 

but soon, before we notice

the storm has now progressed

it's slyly drawing closer

to which we can attest

 

where it is headed,

only the angels can tell

the traffic of the sky

to which these liquids fell

 

the storm begins to fade

only this can last

the memory of this rocky night

to which the sun was cast

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  • WriteOrWrong597
    June 6, 2007

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    Hmm... I really like this, especially since Heaven's bowling in my neighborhood right now! I love the title and the imagery. Good luck in the contest.


  • Matt Holck
    June 4, 2007
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    I remember this poem from before

    on thr great planes one can see where a storm is going