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Points of Recognition

She’s not stupid, nor is she dumb
She knows how life operates and
When to stop what she’s doing
Now she has reached a point
Where she recognizes her mistakes
It’s not the first time, she’s been here
And it probably will not be her last

At each of these stops, it’s time
To reconsider the goal of her life
The reason she’s still living and all
Of those wonderful things that helps
Her make the important decisions
She hates these times because they
Mess her all up and she’s so confused

There are those guys in her life
And they drive her insane with all their
Different views on love and life
Her family life is going crazier with
Each moment she’s actually at home
So now she has figure out how to make
Life calm down and take a chill pill

With each point that goes by
She changes her ways a little bit
To try to better the way she lives
And sometimes it helps, and most
Of the time it really doesn’t, but to her
She always believes that it helps her
As a human being to grow and develop

Who knows? One day she’ll figure out
What works best for her and everyone
And she’ll get into the perfect groove
For her to achieve what she’s after
So these points of recognition that
Everybody does go through sometimes
Might actually be worth the pain and hurt

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  • Tali28
    June 16, 2007

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    Good write. I like it. One day we will all find what works for us in our life, 'til then we have to keep on trying. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the good work. Good luck in the contest. Take care.
    Tali


  • Tali28
    June 4, 2007
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    Thanks

    Thank you for your entry. I will comment further and share my thoughts when the contest ends.
    Tali