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roots of love

Our love is protected forever
by roots that run deep
I shall now, never
let my anger seep

None of my sadness
shall breach our relationship
none of my madness
shall cause me and you to slip

I am willing and able
to make one huge leap
my mind is chilling and stable
my concious shall no longer sleep

Most beautiful girl Ive ever seen,
all of these words
I truly do mean
it is about time you heard

Not one single day on earth
Not a single sleeping second
is this fate since birth
cause I feel my hearts beckoned

Our love is protected forever
by roots that run deep
In out
hearts

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  • Luvable Leashy
    December 15, 2008
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    WOW!!!! I love it!!!!

    you did such a great job!!!! how meaningfull it is, is really powerfull! =)


  • Ignis Corpus
    June 6, 2007

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    thank you for entering my contest i love the poem i can realte to it really well right now... and sometimes i wish i couldnt... good luck

  • heartsshadow
    June 4, 2007
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    "our love is protected forver by roots that run deep in our hearts"..not in out...