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[Some Loves End]

Sitting in the moonlight
Watching all the stars come out
Sitting there just talking
About everything that came to mind
Fears and thoughts and future plans
And everything in between.

I got to know the deeper side of you
And you got to know mine too.
Every day after that just wasn't the same again
I saw the stars and thought of you
And how for once I felt special
L. O. V. E. D.
Something I never felt before

We fell in love somewhere along the line
A picture perfect relationship
The tender cards and phone calls
The teddy bears and chocolate
And everything else there was
I was happy and so were you
Two young people who fell in love

But time that passed opened my eyes
I knew I couldn't do this
I wasn't ready and couldn't handle it
It wasn't right, it would never work
I'm sorry dear, I just couldn't lie
I had tell you before too long
And it was the hardest thing I did

I know I hurt, I know you hurt
But what else could I do?!
In the end it would come to this
No matter how long we pushed it off
We both know it would never have worked
No matter how much we wanted

Please stay with me a little while
Listen to while I explain
My heart is also broken in two
In case you didn't notice

Did you see the tears?!
Did you hear the pain?!
They were there and not a fantasy
I felt it just like you

And now I let you go
To love and hold another girl
One who can do this better then I can
One to always love you...

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  • Sonofdead
    June 5, 2007
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    This is a nice poem. Thanks for the entry. Good luck.