You're the left side, he's the right side....
Crawl little kitty, to the gate,
The sound of never-lasting visions, won't you come?
Jennifer’s waiting.
The old colour, fading quick,
"Who blue - you - The pink sky ?"
Glimmer, flick, flash, Neon! Green in your eyes, it’s the midnight hour...
Visit Pan until you leave, the quick visit that it must be,
Jennifer’s waiting...
Author notes
Option # 1. Lucifer Sam - Pink Floyd
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This is original and a bit confusing but I understoof more as I read on. The way you started was creative. The color references fit with the rainbow background made me happy, Thanks for entering!
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very good... little wierd.. but good
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So awesome! I am a big pink floyd fan, and those are definetly good enough to have been their actual lyrics. So awesome. Now I wanna hear some floyd, lol...
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seems a fitting tribute to Syd. My husband is a real fan of his, and I'm sure I've heard the song a million times, I can't place it because I don't know any of them by name. That said, I think any of his songs are adequate inspiration for a poem like this.
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hmmm....i like it....
btw, the 'your' at the beginning shold be 'you're'
but otherwise i do like it
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