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Imperfection

Scratching at bloated skin,
why can't you see it?


& as two fingers slide
down my throat
the sound echo's
& tells the [story]
of

I M P E R F E C T I O N



She wants to be so
T
H
I
N
But she can't be



So keep starving.
Eat [-Nothing-]


& let the marks on your skin
remind me that I need to
lose

not
eat, & become my hollowed



...Perrrfection.





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Just something I'm struggling with at the moment.

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  • all of my regrets
    June 6, 2007
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    woweee bub...
    i like...
    *****
    hate to say it but story of my life.x


  • oh willoughby
    June 5, 2007

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    "& as two fingers slide
    down my throat
    the sound echo's
    & tells the [story]
    of

    I M P E R F E C T I O N"

    mmm,
    very great poem!!!!


  • burdened
    June 4, 2007

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    Oh hunni, this isn't the way to go, I'm here if you want to talk. It's painful, and there is an easier way. I like the way it isset out, and feel your pain. Let me know if there is anything I can do. PLease take care XxX


    • CianLOVES
      June 4, 2007
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      Thanks for your comment hunny, I dunno I really don't. I dunno I just... hate myself? My body? & its... iunno

  • CianLOVES
    June 4, 2007
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    I'd appreciate if you commented.

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