And WE'RE still not speaking
You s-s-s-studder your way into anewonesidedfriendshipdarlingdearest
And I'm the only side
Cause you're still not speaking
ppppaaauuuussseeeee
......are you there, mydarlingmydead?
*away again*
He heaves another Puff
Anotherpuffanotherpuff
"And it's not ____in' funny"
"And you probably hate me because of it"
But he can't help it
Hesburiedinhisownholenow
Find your own way out
DarlingdearestDEADTOME
Author notes
I don't get it, either.
A contest entry
- Repel - Experimental Poetry by cvillelisa.
450 points, ended June 24, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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What is great about this is everything you didn't write gets to be filled in by the reader.
And something about that "I'm the only side" is very appealing. Very visual. Great job with your experimenting. I like it.
Thanks for reaching out over the edge.
Lisa
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