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Cocoon

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Cocoon like wings
pause to surround,
love's gentle butterfly

pushed away by your constant barrage,
words whispered too loud, too close;
blowing away the rapture.

If I didnt turn me on
to hear you cum,
I would start dating mutes.







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  • macandrew
    June 4, 2007
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    Had some wonderful potential until so rudely interupted.

    Well written.
    John