Darkness.
death.
destruction.
the beginning.
No emotion,
no care.
simple survival.
i've only begun to live.
Light.
life.
peace.
the first feelings.
Joy.
happiness.
caring for others.
i've only begun to love.
Twilight.
rage.
pain.
the present.
Evil.
stealth.
alone.
i've only begun to hate.
Author notes
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Written August 5th, 2003
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i agree w/ phreak a little iffy but ok in the end
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Okay, so I have to be honest and tell you when I first startin readin it it was a bit iffy for me..
but I read more of it, and it started to loosen itself on me, and then I reread it.
I saw a lot of light in it. It was grey, then became lighted. Okay, so I know that so really ridiculous but I have ths thing.. and yeah most people dont believe me but anyways..
so I liked it well.
I think it was very interesting, but at the same time more than that. I liked it.. (still)
That other Phreak -
this is so f+cking interesting. this poem was really captivating ok im going to stop now
ta ta for now
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hey dude intresting write, really meaningful great job!
mwah
Jen -
Very interesting Brandon. I like it.
-Matt- -
Dope muthafucka
Holy shyt, dude, I totally dig this shyt! It's so
simple and yet, so completely great! a masterpiece!!!!
I soooooo love it! And I was getting all scared that you
were leaving ap... which you better not, cause i'll miss
u terribly!
Much love,
Leah -
Very simplistic, but a lot is said. I have to say i'm impressed. Wonderful work.
~Dreamer -
This poem , is very deep, and full of emotion but kept simple at the same time. I really liked it. Great work.
-Carina-
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