Shadow cast towards the light
With a beginning but with no end
Of involutes consumed dimensions
Noises from the ocean bed
The dark that with blood
Drains the veins, drains
Cosmos swallowed within
From beyond the galaxies
Creatures thriving in the dark
Of shadow of its infinite
That which soaks the toil
While burns the other side
Author notes
I wanted to present a differnet and fresh view point on silhoutte.
by, i write passion
A contest entry
- Silhouettes by Danna Hobart.
300 points, ended June 17, 2007, 8 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love the repetition of things that are infiniate;
"with a beginning but no end,"
"From beyond the galaxies"
"of shadow of it's infinate"
Great write, thank you for entering. -
That was definitely a different and fresh viewpoint. I like it very much. Your vocabulary and description was just magical. Great job.
I only ask you put your username in the author comments thx -
This is beautiful. You have really stepped up this competition. Thank you for entering.
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