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Ant: A Really Random and Quite Short Acrostic

Avidly scuttling
Not Stopping
To think, “WHY THE HECK AM I TAKING ORDERS FROM A GIRL???”

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i know, weird. i WOULD put this in my collection for school, but i don't think ms. w. would approve...

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  • WriteOrWrong597
    June 6, 2007

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    Hm...I was reading the comments and wondering if I'm the only one that got the last line? I thought it was clever, really. I don't think your teacher would approve if she's a woman haha. Short but cute.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 5, 2007

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    lol, alright where do you get these, seriously, keep it flowing and just keep them coming i love this one here


  • tsarina
    June 4, 2007
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    hmmm...

    i really don't get the last line. sorry, but my intelligence is no match for your poeticness


    • riasme
      June 4, 2007
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      leik u no, ze qveen iss ze leadehr, ands she hass to ohdeargh zem ahrounds. gets its?

  • Northern Downpour
    June 4, 2007

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    i like it... The last line was very awkward, though. Oh well, it was cute and short... Really short... But, hey, it's an acrostic, I mean, haiku's only have 3 lines, so I say it's really.. well... nice. Good job!

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