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Flying Dreams

Tiny little bird
Pokes his head out of the nest
To see Mama fly.

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Again, last minute 4 school... :L this is the last Haiku, though, now I'm going on to acrostic and...concrete *screams and clutches face, leaving fingernail marks*

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  • WriteOrWrong597
    June 6, 2007

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    Wow. Great haiku. This form of poetry is weird...either you say so much in three short lines or you have three mismatched, stupid lines. You really said a lot here (a good thing, yes). It may seem simple, but I really liked it.


  • tsarina
    June 5, 2007
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    warblettes live!!

    IT IS SO AWESOME THAT WARBLETTES ARE FLYING!!!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 5, 2007

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    this reminds me of when i was a kid watching my mother go to work, keep it flowing, i like this one

  • tsarina
    June 4, 2007
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    warble!

    this sooo reminds me of warble and the warblettes! were you inspired by this?