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Faded Marks

the Coyote cries Absently
Swirling her tail
Seemingly Without a Purpose
until it Reaches up and
Dusts the Stars
leaving only
Faded Marks
behind

and so they
Gaze in Wonder
Empty Channels
Divert the Path

the Crone lifts her Fingers
Trailing unknown Patterns
in the Hallowed Air
Attempting to Scar
but ending up with
Faded Marks
left behind

and so they
try to Free the Spirit
by Giving it another Name
but it is
no Different
still Caged

Author notes

Just don't use my name in your comments, or anything like that, and all will be well. Perhaps a shoddy disguise, but I enjoyed crafting it.

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  • infinite spirit
    June 25, 2007

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    ^_^ I LOVE this poem. it has the feel of a prophecy turned lullaby. it's beautfil and soft yet so deep and so eloquent. thankyouthankyou!