While I am glad to finally be free,
So many say I must get some degree.
And some have graduated, but I see
They are no better off. Some disagree.
They say that I'll regret it if I flee
But I am sure, for all eternity,
I'll not regret escaping misery
Or all the snobs who think they're perfectly
Well rounded. I would much more rather be
A person with my own identity.
And I believe that luminosity
In life is not attained by some degree,
But rather by your own sincerity
To not just others, but yourself, you see
I know that four more years would only be
A step away from my life's fantasy.
And If I am remem'bring perfectly,
I'm pretty sure my life belongs to me.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like this shows you know your heart and what you want in this crazy life. It was well written, great flow. Your a strong soul and it shows through in your pen, great job. Kaylea
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Quick-witted
Liked the monorhyme, and I being too unfamiliar and not very fond of it, see it differently due your sharp pen.
Well-rounded..HAHAA
Couldn't help but laugh there..
Good job, Frodofan.
Go give 'em hell
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i count 18 mono rhymes. it reminds me that freshmen in college are 18 years old. nice touch with the number. i'm in college. if someone has a degree, that's nice.. but one has to know what to do afterwards.
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Excellent
Really wonderful, and surprisingly not the least bit monotonous, even though you've employed some 18 mono-rhymes. Great job, and best of luck in the contest.
David Michaels
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