Blackness everywhere,
No one seems to care,
Pain throughout her body,
She really wanted to be somebody,
Suicide, Suicide, Suicide,
These thoughts still make her cry,
"Tell me...am I really that bad?
That God chose to turn me mad,"
She wants to die,
She's refusing to live her life!
She's so scared,
And not at all prepared,
But she cannot be that girl,
She wants, she needs to unfurl,
She won't let you push her around,
She's going somewhere she won't be found,
"I'm sorry and I love you all,
But please this is my call,
Things will get better,
But for now you're reading this letter,"
Blood now flows from her body,
Oh how she wanted to be somebody.....
A contest entry
- All for All (im taking all poems and no rules =) )) by Erozay.
550 points, ended May 9, 2008, 38 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - best prewrites by dory.
500 points, ended July 30, 2008, 89 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me Dark by The.Tango.Emily.
600 points, ended July 31, 2008, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
PLEASE tell me what you think!
Comments
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Great write!
Welcome to the finals! -
ok im now deeply deppressed p.p its good


