I've been beaten
I've been battered
I've been bruised
Torn down, chastised and used
But nothing compares to you
You took me you killed me
Left me to rot in hell
Yet still I ask for you
I beg and I plead
I want what we have
I want it to last
Don't leave me
Not now
Not ever
I give my whole life for your satisfaction
I'll be your sacrifice
Just for one more kiss
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired by Tattboyspet.
600 points, ended June 15, 2007, 9 entries
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thats such a wonderful poem, i know exactly how you feel.
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oh god this is so intense and sensational.
i jst hope that ur not suffering as u described in this poem.
miss u sweety, ive been away for my exams
glad to b back
peace
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wow
i really like this peice ...i like it alot...great great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
Good job!
Thank you for the entry
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wow i loved it
it was really good great job!!!!!!!!
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