I'm
Inside
Asylum
For the insane
But I am alright
Because fortunately
I am altogether sane
I will not be influenced by
The other people that are here
Because they are demented, I'm not
I have to get out, I will find a way
I know I'll get out eventually
But it's becoming more important
I am beginning to collapse
Can't barricade the pictures
The escape route is set
I will get out now
Sanity, saved
I'm out now
Lucid
Free
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under Only ~ Pick a Title and Roll With it 2 by Amunet Wolfbane.
450 points, ended June 14, 2007, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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You did a great job writing this piece, especially in form as well. It's not often you see someone so young attempting to write in form either. A major kudos to you for that! Great Job!
Blessings
celticmoon
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nice~
i was about to think that you were going to end up being in there for the rest of the poem~
thank god you proved me wrong and got out of that place~ *no offense to the people that have to be in there... but you know what i mean*
good luck.
i'm glad you're out now
free
you really put the emotion in that.
i really felt like a innocent prisoner, set free.
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I will not be influenced by
The other people that are here
Because they are demented, I'm not
amen to that...hahahahaha great job on this poem!!!
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what youve created is a form called a rictameter of which it's be be in centered alignment
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Thanks ^_^
I'm pretty inexperienced with forms of poetry
so it's nice to learn more about different forms.
Thank you for telling me, and I hope you like the poem.
^_^
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