Your gonna be hurt
Your gonna get it bad
But what is before
Won't make you mad
There will be troubles
In everylife
So just push forward
Forget the strife
Noone is perfect
Though they may try
And ther will be problems
With every guy
So live for today
Don't worry of tomorrow
Live up the good stuff
And forget the sorrow
A contest entry
- ღinspiredღ pt. 2 (open to everyone!) by erininthesky.
405 points, ended June 8, 2007, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is really good!!i miss talking to you. lol u were the one to help me thru my problems. i guess lifes gotten a little better for me
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The 3rd stanza "Noone is perfect
Though they may try
And ther will be problems
With every guy"
just speaks the truth.
I love this whole poem
great job.
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I like it, a lot. You can tell that you really mean these things that you said in this poem, and I love the last line "and forget the sorrow". It just speaks to me, I don't know why... thanks for sharing. Good luck!
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wow
you are so right...this poem really puts things in perspective...great write keep them commin babe
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Great emotion
True sometimes we need to life for the moment. Good write. (Lisa)
"There will be troubles
In everylife
So just push forward
Forget the strife
Noone is perfect
Though they may try
And ther will be problems
With every guy"
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