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The Closest To Heaven

Other friend’s lies
Is all that I can hear
As the babies cry down the street
The water hits the pavement
You’re the closest thing to heaven, which I know
Because I know I've already sold my own soul

Lying in corner
Body leaned upon against the wall
As the sliver blade penetrates my arm
I bleed just to know that I'm alive
Through tear strained eyes
My world slowly gets cloudy
Can't find the strength to face the day

You’re the closest thing to heaven
You’re the only one who sees me as I am
You shatter all of the walls
To protect myself from you
You opened up my shell
Tried to fix me, when I was meant to broken

Your the closest thing to heaven
Because you know the pain that I feel

Author notes

I was inspired by one of my favorite songs

Iris by the "GOO GOO DOLLS"

What's cool about this picture is that it's me and it's just in a cartoon version edited and I think that it fits the poem well. Tell me what you think! Enjoy!

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  • Sia
    October 24, 2007
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    Good

    I thought it was pretty good. I wish it had been longer though. Either way nice job ^_^