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Vulnerable

I am standing here
Crying out to you
It doesn't matter no more
I can't fix it
I know not what else to do
I have felt heard
And I know pain
But nothing like this
When you left you took my heart
I have nothing left but a shriveled soul
So lend me you ear
If just for a second
I am nothing without you
Please come back
I cannot breath
It's not worth it
Unless you are hear
I have lost the will to live
I am left alone
Out in the cold and naked
Without your loving protection
I am so vulnerable

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  • Dalaney gold member
    June 4, 2007

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    A very good entry. Thank
    you so much for writing this
    and for entering it in my
    contest. Love, Lane