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Lost

Lips,
loving lavishly,
linger--lucidity lost

In a list

A contest entry

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  • penman gold member
    June 11, 2007

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    Wonderful

    Very creative. Great reading, not sure I want to say it outloud. Congrats on the honorable mention.

  • Billbard silver member
    June 9, 2007

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    Thank you very much for your fine entry in the Alliterative Haynaku Contest.i hope your writing it was as my reading it.