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... you ...

The melody that sings with you
to harmonize with my soul ...
The virtues that behold you
to meld with virtues I extol ...
The energy that emits from you
to mingle with my own ...
The completeness that I see in you
to match the completeness I have known ...

The tears that I bare to you
to dry those tears you shed ...
The truth that I reveal to you
to understand all that you've said ...
The laughter that I share with you
to warm a gladdened heart ...
The love that I give to you
to join, and never to part ...

MEg  1/8/2001

Author notes

Another long ago written poem to my beloved late husband.

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  • sassykitty
    July 16, 2008

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    I'm so glad I found this poem, apart from the fact it reminds me of one of my own! well also a wonderful memory that I have. I loved the way you opened with the recollection of a song and the intensity of the love you obviously have shines through. Having read your author's notes really brings this home to me and it's so evidently an elegy of intense love you have allwoed us to share. Geeat write, I really liked this. Thank you.