When I look in the mirror
Who do I see?
I have no clue,
But I know it's not me.
She's skinny and pretty
Her hair's straight
She's thin.
Everyone loves her,
She loves the body she's in.
She's smart, yet still modest
Something I'm not.
She has mad athletic skills
And her boyfriend thinks she's hot.
When I look in the mirror
Who do I see?
Hey I figured it out now...
It's who I wish I could be!
A contest entry
- Doesn't this Title seem to be too clickable by Abidoodle333.
700 points, ended June 14, 2007, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice work
I always love these poems!
Thanx for entering, good luck
Abidoodle
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interesting
This is an interesting piece sis it kind of makes me sad though I understand how you feel. I'm sure you're damn sexy though. thanks for posting best wishes and good waves. Love bunches ~Tai-san the 13th poet
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This was really good! I liked it. It had a really good flow to it. And for the record, you are pretty!
Keep up the good work!
~J.P.~
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