Reaching out through time and empty space
Oh, what I’d give to be with you once more
My love, sweet memories flutter around my
Aching head as bitter tears bleed from these
Now hollow eyes, burning my cheeks as they
Crash down. Come home, for it’s only in your
Embrace that this agony will finally fade away
~*~
Author notes
an acrostic...im not very good with acrostics but i gave it a go! thanks for reading! xxx
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You're right, you're not great with acrostic, you're amazing at it! I really loved this. I can literally feel the emotion on every line, and I can relate as well. Keep up the good work!
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Nice romantic acrostic dear very strong words and
character and very heart skipping it was worth my eyes -
well done!!!
you decribe that you are crying instead of actually saying it. the aching head describes that you been waiting a long time for him. to come back.
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thank you so much for your lovely comment!! i really appreciate you taking time to do so!! take care, Sam (Dreams27) xx
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Just beautiful! So very heartfelt and lovely, such strong emotion contained in these words. A wonderful piece. I loved it.
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