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The Seduction of Alcibiades (part)

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Alcibiades:

My being gay confines me to this hell?
You say I have done wrong, I may as well,
Show death as true to from, it could be worse
From anything that would so reimburse
The image given God you so explore.


Socrate:

Rich pickings are a vastly made depiction,
To cherished thought from any said affliction,
The soul is non-complex and unexplained
To feel the way, no other love conceives,
As being formed caresses this maintained
Then God obliged and to this day believes.


Alcibiades:
(thinks)


I changed for him not once denounced it sin  
Our pose with nothing on with pleasant ease,
That once we start, should it evolve again
Then Socrates your mindful wish to tease
Would relish it’s exactness to this scale.
A would-be tease philanderer hold a man
In wild esteem remember he were male
Yet treat him like he would another woman,
With vigour, soul destroying manly wholes'.

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  • Dalaney gold member
    June 4, 2007
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    I like this.
    Very much. I
    welcome you to
    my finalist list.
    Love, Lane


  • Jalalbad gold member
    June 4, 2007
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    Great write as always

    yet I am still trying to digest this one???


  • Amera gold member
    June 4, 2007

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    well done!

    This is not only well penned but it is very profound. Why must others judge? It makes no sense to judge another’s love. Those doing the judging are usually the religions zealots that are told in the bible not to judge.

    Love,
    Amera ♥


  • Poetdontknowit
    June 4, 2007
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    WHOA

    This is very deep. BUT ISN'T IT JUST QUOTES? They do make a lot of sense. nice!
    POETDONTKNOWIT