The blackest thorn bears the whitest blossom
Love can be found where least expected, and touch bossoms
O' those who strongly believe in this Godly gift
From the King o' the Land o' Leal.
No speeches uttered only a few gestures
As red roses and smiles from creatures o' a different nature,
Are shared and hearts throb as they share a moment o' bliss
Eyes closely glued at each other
As evil at that moment ceased to exist.
Love is Yah and Yah is Love
And He rules the hearts o' those
Who believe in His great existence,
And thus showers His pious benedictions unto their souls
A contest entry
- Wicked Games and Lithium Dreams [18+] by Immortal Obscurity.
900 points, ended October 19, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful.
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I agree with EtD... It had a very calm feeling to it, and it was full of beautiful imagery. Very passionate and sweet, full of love and peace. An amazing read, from every facet. This one left me in awe... I felt inspired.
I would also ask that you please put your option # in the authors' notes. Thank you, and good luck in my contest!
L.
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Wow...definately a different approach. I like your use of wording, more of a Shakespearian touch. Good work!
I will have to DQ this entry if you do not place your username in the Author Notes though. You have until the contest ends to fix it.
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