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A Song For You

Were I to transcribe what my elated spirit contains
Then for you my dear, I’d write a resplendent refrain

Such a song would begin very serene and replete  
With trance like melodies to give your senses a treat

Then, a brief pause before this piece would progress,
Time enough to tell you, of my devotion and confess

That because of your love, my soul is now completed
And dark feelings of despair; have now been defeated

Yes, a composition of love would I croon at your whim
With heartfelt affection like a grand and soulful hymn.

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  • Turtledove
    November 9, 2007
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    Well done

    Love your use of alliteration in this; I love the last line the best. Well done.


  • Bluebook Pet
    June 19, 2007
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    Love is such a soothing sound. Thanks for your advice for my poem


  • glued-to
    June 19, 2007

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    this is a very sweet piece. i do hope that this is a true love poem with someone to recieve it because it melts my heart away and i don't even know you. this is what romance is about i think. thank you for your entry. good luck


  • Wild Mustang
    June 11, 2007
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    For some reason it seems like this piece could have used another stanza... As if it was almost complete but not quite. However, that could be just me . This is still a great piece and I'm glad to have stumbled upon it. I look forward to reading work from you in the future.

    ~ Wild


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 5, 2007

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    Wow! This is soft, serene, beautiful and totally romantic
    I think this is a fine sharing into the contest...thank you


  • Nature Song silver member
    June 4, 2007

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    A meaningful song, one to capture her heart. You would pause long enough to tell her so. Wonderful lines, full of love. Good luck in your contest ~Sie

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