There was I
standing in borrowed glory
Like Cinderella
Hoping for enough time with you
Before the midnight hour
Aware that I was dangerously close to the edge
But knowing it was worth it all and more
Wanting just to bask in your presence
And soak up the essence you protrude
Feeling slightly uncomfortable though
Because
I'm just not sure
You will do the searching afterward
That is required
To reconnect me with you
And to wonder
within myself
If you will connect the dots
That will lead you forward
Back into my arms again.
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A contest entry
- 1,000 POINTS...THREE OPTIONS by Dalaney.
1000 points, ended June 9, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"If you will connect the dots
that will lead you forward
back into my arms again...."
This is extraordinary. So human,
so tenderly written. I love this
poem. Thank you very much for
entering my contest.
Love, Lane
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Wow
I am honored that you liked it, thanks so much. lol
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Awe very good job with portraying vulnerability. I liked this write alot and good luck in this contest.
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TY
You are too kind, thanks so much.
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Very nice
This is an excellent write. You portraied the whole cinderella image perfect in my opinion. great job.
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Why thank you so much, I appreciate these comments.
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