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This Isn't Her

No confidence
Lots of hiding
No screaming
No yelling
Lots of pain
And slow tears
That roll down her cheeks

The pain is in her eyes
Don't you see?
A smile
A laugh
She hides behind  those things

This isn't her

She gasps
As the pain flows
And the tears run
What has she done?
This isn't her she says
As she accepts the fact
She'll have to work
To be happy again.

Author notes

This poem is mostly about me....It's like I've changed so much in the last couple of years. The before last I was quiet and shy, but then last year I like broke out of my shell and I was happy....and that was the real me. This year is so different...I'm not super quiet...it's just that I'm different and it's not me....and sometimes I just wish people would see that this isn't me. That usually I'm a happy go with the flow, loud girl who likes to have fun. I also realize though that I'm not just going to suddenly be happy someday...I'm going to have to work hard to be happy most of the time again...and so far it's working...

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Comments


  • TayBug007
    December 15, 2007
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    thats really good


  • Kiwi Pineapple
    July 6, 2007
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    Wonderfully Amazing

    It's incredible Ash!
    You're a great poet
    :]]

  • LOVELY

    OMG! i love it Ash~ you're so good. i love the way it looks too....GOOD JOB!!! it's a sad poem though =[ i agree with your thoughts on happiness too.
    LOVE YOU!