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slight slice
soundless wind
piegeon wings
in Bay St. Terminal

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a proper Haiku, no title, no verbs, little to no punctuation, no capitalization, few preposition/conjunction, emphasis on nature & observation of a singular moment with a surprise/twist. This one happens to have 2 twists.

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    June 12, 2007
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    waiting

    for the subway? wind blowing pigeons always present