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no rain
late grey Spring
light
while sun lost

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If I was to title it: "a strange grey"

Yea. I had no music and I got sick of perusing the freakin' Classifieds, so that means I wrote a lot on the bus. It was a strange weather, so a couple haikus came about as the weather changed.

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    June 12, 2007
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    oh... bus riding haikus they are real and down to earth


  • be a circle
    June 4, 2007
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    I've been pursuing classifieds too.
    Moving out today, too.
    Hey, are you not in Windsor? not coming back to Windsor? Because in which case... 1. I didn't get to say goodbye and 2. I have a bunch of your stuff. I'll need a mailing address. Unless I decide to drive up there anytime soon.