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Happy Birthday

The sunbeams drizzle lazily down
Upon the just freshly cut lawn
Not a city around for miles
The small girl simply smiles
Away from lights and lots of confusion
Away from green skies, city pollution
On an emerald hill she lay
On the young girl’s birthday

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I wrote this for So Be it. It's her birthday on the 4th of June.

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  • So Be It
    June 4, 2007

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    AWWW! Between the Boarder's Gift Card, The Batman Figure and the "Touch Me!" Lamp, this has to be my favorite gift so far. Love ya lots!