Standing here before you
I embrace myself securely,
Keeping nothing from you
bare to skin, to touch
to everything
that's ever seemed as vital
Caressed by breezes like the tide
and I'm hoping that you'd join me.
For now what's left to hide
from this sight that's left to see?
For now what's left to write,
bathed and robed in our duality?
For now, let's spend the night
Weaving love within our unity,
Our nudity, our light.
Author notes
I tried to do a combination of all three options, I leave you to decide how well I did.
A contest entry
- 1,000 POINTS...THREE OPTIONS by Dalaney.
1000 points, ended June 9, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is stunning... a beautiful piece, thank you SO much for sharing it with me.
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This is a totally amazing piece of poetry.
I can tell you've incorporated the three
options, which is excellent, and the result
is a powerful piece. Thank you so much for
entering my contest...and welcome, to the
Prelim list
Love, Lane
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