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She Couldnt But He did

She sits with blood dripping from her wrist
He broke her heart now she is pissed
So as she sleeps,hes unaware
Shes plannig to do something she shouldnt dare
As he sleeps she sneaks into his room
But falls as she climbs in the window,hits the floor with a boom
but he dosent wake
Still un aware his soul shell take
she walks to his bed,without miss
She uses her venom covered lips to give him a kiss
but she could not kill him because of her love
So she curses heaven above
but as she turns around he wakes and reaches for his knife he stabs her in the back again

Author notes

I kno its not that great but i only wrote it for a contest

A contest entry

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